Audio battle
2 mins
due may 19th 11:59pm est
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Audio battle
2 mins
due may 19th 11:59pm est
His page
https://i.imgur.com/eKmNLHu.png
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NZ7OFKeqAAI
https://soundcloud.com/celph-taut/co...e-rip-lux-diss
Lyrics
'Dis who I'm battling? Mr. Glass Jaw? I'll shatter it..
N' use the shards from what's left you drop just to stab you with!
You pussy, you never had no hits (NONE)
Even on Youtube, you're pulling below average clicks
But let's be honest, a name like that? I imagine it's..
more than likely the reason they gassing you..
With that traffic, especially with that trash you spit!
Dis punch? Will leave you right where you stand
You can be "non-binary", n "identify" with these hands!!
You enterprising, but damn... I'm-a bully you
Then dig a hole just to be on the level you took it to
Even by his name you can tell he's corny
..Rip Lux: what... YOU'RE TRYING MAKE THIS EASY FOR ME??
...And I don't wanna hear that trash
They call you Specter cause it's "clear" that's ass; I'll tear that fast
N' then scrap your blueprint
Put an end to your little counter-culture movement
Che Guevara posters on your walls n' shit - Little Homie: get off his balls, cause it's...
Obvious to us you indoctrinated n' all, but this...
Will be your wake up call, you bitch; No apologies
"Right hands" for every "left"-wing ideology
Threw a party when they fired Tucker Carlson
These hands split you up, Lux: they're anti-bipartisan!
And What's United Front? You might of thunk'...
You're Lebron in here...'till you try to dunk. Just try me, once..
...Man, you know what's up, turn your flow to dust
No battle show, to know that this Calicoe'!? leave you Loaded, LUX!
Shaking my head whenever you drop a flow
How they call you Specter? you got no "spirit" to drop with "soul"!
Oh!!!! I hit him right in the feels
You're standing behind your "bars", but you got no likely "appeals"
So, let me strike you some deals ...Said you got no soul/sole
But you know I'm right on your "heels" for those rhymes you tried to conceal!!
'Dis is over kill, Eli Porter vs Cloverfield
Movie trailer is rolling: know everything that you flow ain't "reel"
Just an actor, but it's no sweat
This shit was uphill, but him going down will be his biggest "roll", yet...
Spectre, this was a cool track but honestly the first half of it really just felt like a self hype / flex piece. Direct disses start coming in around the 1:10 mark. I wish there was more setups and punches and haymakers going on here though. I like your flow, cadence, aggression, all that is cool... but as a diss, it felt a little light if im being honest
Celph, comes out the gate swinging with that nice opener and i mean, your foot just stays on the gas through the entire verse. identify with these hands bar was hard. personals, right hands for left wings . . the attacks just kept piling up and the verses was vicious from start to end.
Nice little throwdown here. I think lux gave up too many lines on self hypse / flex and it was costly when you are battling someone who is hitting you bar after bar with better setups, personals, and punches.
Nice that’s you banner tagged… I like that idea so I don’t miss shit you know.
Damn it feel like betrayal cause it feel like spectra1 out a same camp but I’m not with the gay disses, that’s played out and getting old and too disrespectful these days.
Celph brought it cause even though I didn’t like the beat I bopping to it the entire time cause of the flow.
Go again… tie breaker
First dude was cool, had a decent sounding voice for audio… little self hype ish but overall not bad… it just didn’t seem to directed toward celph… could of been directed toward anyone just seems like u said his name a few times that’s it… chill little flow, nothing crazy but it was an alright verse.. quality wasn’t to bad either.. as for celph beat was cool, I liked the first dudes better but as for punches they seem to hit harder then other dude… more direct towards him also… overall I gotta go with celph cuz his just seem to do more damage ..vote- celph
Thanks for the votes
Keep it coming
When you construct a battle verse that highlights your own strengths rather than your opponents weaknesses, you waste time and momentum, which you need to take advantage of from the opening bar and then consistently add to as the track progresses. Celph did this with an air of professionalism. He didn't work against himself, he approached this as a battle and in doing so his verse was far better of a listen. For Spectre, I would suggest you take a closer look at Celphs lyrics. They were direct, personal, and didn't rely on generic content. If you want to build an image for yourself in a battle, do so by exploiting your opponents flaws. That will be more effective than braggadocio.
V-Celph Taut
Gonna call this a KO. Thanks for the votes, people. Good battle, Spectre.