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@Phalanx
@Slayerr.
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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Phalanx
@Slayerr.
A revolutionary military tactic, these are facts I spit
Phalanx was ahead of the curve - until he backed up and sat on it
When I Blitzen?
He'll watch a family member die w/ a scream every time I line up a beam
Then the red dot will send Slay to the sky like Rudolph was guiding the team
I like the "ahead of the Curve" concept. I think however the way it was used just left me thinking of all the possibilities that coulda been harder. The slay to the sky part was pretty nasty. The reindeer thing made it funny but deadly also so MVGT Phalanx.
When I Blitzen?
He'll watch a family member die w/ a scream every time I line up a beam
Then the red dot will send Slay to the sky like Rudolph was guiding the team
Phal got this with better setup/punch.. and wordplay... all of it flowed smoothly ...though i'm sure a Rudolph line, at this point, might be a little played ... it is enough to beat Slay
vote -Phal
Vote - Phal Very Dope punch.
VOTE PHALANX
v/Phalanx
Slayerr you were seating on some heat i think. but i believe you could have ended that punch a lot harder. Him, just taking a seat should have been more prolific or violent. Phalanx good take and concept. nice flow.
Liked slayers straight to it approach in this. The idea of sitting on a curve is a bit vague but the rest was on point. Phal had some decent stuff going on too, I'm not into the reindeer shit as a reference topic, it's knocking on the doors of corny but the wordplay & execution was good enough to get the W.
Vote Phal