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You's a bitch take this as a token of appreactiation dick!
but i see it how i call it and thats his affilliation being a prick!
im sick and tired of kids with these wack names that suck
then he'll go on and on about how he's fucked dames & such.
but imma just leave you alone or leave you be dumb ass
you couldnt track meet mines he just tries to run fast.
he young and stuntin why be hooked on phonics bitch,
you should stick to your day job with electronics glitch.
but i put filler up like it was gasoline to set the blaze
and kids lookin ^ to ra like why you set this kid ablazed.
Pound For Pound, U 16 ounces shy, n that dont say anough
This Scales lopsided, Come on "gramz" get ur WEIGHT UP
Take a paY Cut??? Naw son, my pocketz STAY THICK
So Accept it or get back on ur Horse, Either way get off Cage dick(nick cage)
im hearin tha same shyt, from alot of wack actorz
Didnt RB write a Handbook for this NEWBIE ass Battle rapperz?
Read up....Learn tha Basics, before u make another attempt at rap..
Cuz u dont want ur son to grow up without u, then Join Rb to avenge his dad
that'd be sad...And u'll never make it to tha top nigga, the spotz filled
only time u'll ever get mention, is in mass confusion.........
...........like, what the fuck is RA ILL????
keyed up....busy as shyt, fuck it
Vote Ra Ill
Young...your line about kid avengin his dad was decent
otherwise...you had good flow, just no good concepts
ra was lacking in concepts too but this was decent enuf
but imma just leave you alone or leave you be dumb ass
you couldnt track meet mines he just tries to run fast.
work on concepts...up^
Vote DQ'ed
-CAS
was that a real fuckinn vote???? "leave you alone ot leave you be dumb ass"Quote:
Originally Posted by Vallus
first learb how to form sentences? mayne, iono im throwin thatr out that...wow thou, im shocked...thatz some funny shyt foreal
upo
i'll break this down for yall
ill
You's a bitch take this as a token of appreactiation dick!
but i see it how i call it and thats his affilliation being a prick!
no
im sick and tired of kids with these wack names that suck
then he'll go on and on about how he's fucked dames & such.
nah
but imma just leave you alone or leave you be dumb ass
you couldnt track meet mines he just tries to run fast.
no
he young and stuntin why be hooked on phonics bitch,
you should stick to your day job with electronics glitch.
wut, no
but i put filler up like it was gasoline to set the blaze
and kids lookin ^ to ra like why you set this kid ablazed.
the blaze, a blazed....nah man.....the concept wuz cool ur shoula re-worded it
youngin
Pound For Pound, U 16 ounces shy, n that dont say anough
This Scales lopsided, Come on "gramz" get ur WEIGHT UP
mehhh
Take a paY Cut??? Naw son, my pocketz STAY THICK
So Accept it or get back on ur Horse, Either way get off Cage dick(nick cage)
no
im hearin tha same shyt, from alot of wack actorz
Didnt RB write a Handbook for this NEWBIE ass Battle rapperz?
nah
Read up....Learn tha Basics, before u make another attempt at rap..
Cuz u dont want ur son to grow up without u, then Join Rb to avenge his dad
i dnt know why but i chuckled at this....even tho it wuz stretched
that'd be sad...And u'll never make it to tha top nigga, the spotz filled
only time u'll ever get mention, is in mass confusion.........
...........like, what the fuck is RA ILL????
mehh....
this was a weak battle, and ra ill come on now....i've seen u come way better then that....i dnt think u threw one decent punch
youngin, u need to set ya verse up better...noone likes the newbie style WHEN u "Write" like THIS every "other" BAR.......but other than that u had with alittle better verse.....
vote=youngin, by a cunt hair
RTF:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...231/index.html
upiop
damn...this was 2 dayz ago? and one vote?
You's a bitch take this as a token of appreactiation dick!
but i see it how i call it and thats his affilliation being a prick!
no
im sick and tired of kids with these wack names that suck
then he'll go on and on about how he's fucked dames & such.
no
but imma just leave you alone or leave you be dumb ass
you couldnt track meet mines he just tries to run fast.
no
he young and stuntin why be hooked on phonics bitch,
you should stick to your day job with electronics glitch.
No
but i put filler up like it was gasoline to set the blaze
and kids lookin ^ to ra like why you set this kid ablazed.
-alright but word it better
youngin
Pound For Pound, U 16 ounces shy, n that dont say anough
This Scales lopsided, Come on "gramz" get ur WEIGHT UP
Seems bitten
Take a paY Cut??? Naw son, my pocketz STAY THICK
So Accept it or get back on ur Horse, Either way get off Cage dick(nick cage)
Eh
im hearin tha same shyt, from alot of wack actorz
Didnt RB write a Handbook for this NEWBIE ass Battle rapperz?
No
Read up....Learn tha Basics, before u make another attempt at rap..
Cuz u dont want ur son to grow up without u, then Join Rb to avenge his dad
Haha
that'd be sad...And u'll never make it to tha top nigga, the spotz filled
only time u'll ever get mention, is in mass confusion.........
...........like, what the fuck is RA ILL????
Nah
Vote Youngin
poll it
ight anyone else?
Garb
vs
Read up....Learn tha Basics, before u make another attempt at rap..
Cuz u dont want ur son to grow up without u, then Join Rb to avenge his dad
Ra had no punches or concepts, just abunch of fillers. nothing battle worthy in his verse. you need to get some concepts and think of some clever punchlines
Young had an okay closer wit a weak opener but the bar i quoted was the best one in this battle...
v/ YOUNG
RTF:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...167/index.html
No need for a break down, Ra Ill had more meaning full punches, not a cash cow commerical gimmic like yungstuntz or whatevr his name is. His verse was structured well with even syllables to a point
Ra Ill Won This
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...178/index.html
r u fuckin stupid? seriously...do u dumb ass mah fuckaz fall outta treez like money does? cuz therz soo many of u.... his verse was structured well? for real. u and a bunch of otherz need to be taken out back n BuriedQuote:
Originally Posted by SKYLIT
set the battle up, ill eat you alive.
forgot my vote link for ya guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...214/index.html
im not even gonna break it down, read through it once and thought it was self explanatory. ra ill verse was lacking punches, it rhymed but i didn't see the point, young needs alot of work but atleast he threw a few jabs, Ali this one for a win. like karpis said
v=young by a cunt hair, and that bitch is shaved
Ra Ill:
You's a bitch take this as a token of appreactiation dick!
but i see it how i call it and thats his affilliation being a prick!
naw
im sick and tired of kids with these wack names that suck
then he'll go on and on about how he's fucked dames & such.
not direct, throwing punches with your eyes closed won't hit no one....
but imma just leave you alone or leave you be dumb ass
you couldnt track meet mines he just tries to run fast.
^ no....
he young and stuntin why be hooked on phonics bitch,
you should stick to your day job with electronics glitch.
^ naw
but i put filler up like it was gasoline to set the blaze
and kids lookin ^ to ra like why you set this kid ablazed.
you basically rhymed blazed and blaze....i ain't feeling it....
YOUNG:
Pound For Pound, U 16 ounces shy, n that dont say anough
This Scales lopsided, Come on "gramz" get ur WEIGHT UP
decent
Take a paY Cut??? Naw son, my pocketz STAY THICK
So Accept it or get back on ur Horse, Either way get off Cage dick(nick cage)
naw didn't feel that....
im hearin tha same shyt, from alot of wack actorz
Didnt RB write a Handbook for this NEWBIE ass Battle rapperz?
Meh
Read up....Learn tha Basics, before u make another attempt at rap..
Cuz u dont want ur son to grow up without u, then Join Rb to avenge his dad
^ meh k
that'd be sad...And u'll never make it to tha top nigga, the spotz filled
only time u'll ever get mention, is in mass confusion.........
...........like, what the fuck is RA ILL????
okay....
All around this was a pretty weak battle, but Young was just a tad bit more consitant....i felt some of his shit, i didn't feel Ra that much dude.....
Vote = Young
RTF: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...224/index.html
1. Nah, weak opener.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ra Ill
2. Nah, no real diss here.. pretty wack.
3. One of your better attempts, but the wording was horrible...
4. No.
5. Nah.
Not one quotable, not one good bar in the whole verse.. One of the worst I've seen from you overall... I know you can write better than that, you slacked off here big time.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Younginzstuntin
1. Nah, wack.
2. I dunno.. I kind of like this bar, decent.
3. Nooo.
4. Lmfao... No.
5. Nah.
Overall a pretty weak drop... Only one decent line up there, it's not even all that great but the best line of the battle for sure. Work on setting up your punches and come with better concepts.
V/ Young cause he had one good line and Ra had zero.