I'll take one for both...
That is all..
-XM
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I'll take one for both...
That is all..
-XM
Can you help me out with topicals? Thanks.
sure drop a link to ur latest and I shall evaluate from there
Been working on this one for a couple days. This pieces inspiration was this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-_R0aTPyc4
I don’t get it anymore, the world done change
Hip hops on a different scale, different range
Government telling us what we can’t write
New generation rappers take credit for shit they bite
Where the skilled emcees at? Keep hip hop alive
Back then they were rapping just to survive
It’s a business now, where the talent at?
I ain’t hating but how we got soulja boy at bat?
Hip hops all about who the best entrepreneur?
Just to sell a record the pain we gotta endure
Are we doing the right thing? Spike Lee
Got cops attacking, why they wanna fight me?
The youth right, who else is to blame?
Aren’t we the main reason rappers got fame?
Politicians blame, fuck it they all the same
I’m painting you a picture inside the frame
Chorus:
Hip Hop done change.. x1
Verse 2:
They rap about partying, money fame and bitches
When real rappers don’t care if they got a mil in riches
It’s the only time where we can let loose
Let emotions become the rhymes that we choose
Big L, Papoose, Biggie, 2pac,
Now they rhyming about the Jin they pop
The rap industry been altered since when we going to church
Before you say I’m wrong at least do some research
Change does come over time, I have to agree
But the rappers that produce lines, it’s nothing but debris
It’s like ’79 was a ship, crash landed into hell
Old rappers dipped, fake rappers overtook like a cancer cell
and I got another piece I been working on, I'm trying out a different rhyme scheme in this one..
Lemme tell you about a girl, with the perfect frame
Way out of my league, so this was the game
She had blue eyes, the Caribbean cannot describe
The way her blond hair would add to that vibe
Compliments never said, she thought chivalry was dead
I told her that I liked her and she said "go ahead"
Now this girl had a friend who I dated
Should I stay or leave for her I contemplated
XM, my msn.
leonlev1@hotmail.com hit me up.
Ok I can already tell what type of writer you are. You have an audio sense like me, you're just undeveloped when it comes down to it. It'll just come off basic. Your vocabulary need some serious work. But this isn't an actual topic it's just lyrics to a song your writing.
I can help you write better songs through topicals and I think that is what you're really looking for.
I have a thread stickie called Topical and Text 101 read it.
Haha that's kind of true. I'm more of an audio person. I'll check out your topic, and yeah, I'd like to write better songs in topicals.
Sorry Holiday's if you would like to continue just let me know.
I will need you to take an SS topic and write 22-60 lines. Let me know your topic and i'll do the same. I start with creativity and show you the difference between a predictable approach and a clever one that draws the readers in.
Verse 1 Got a girl in the fucking trunk, She has tasted my spunk, Now the fucking trunk is smelling like a skunk, She should never went with that punk who she thought was a hunk, I'm driving the car down quiet lane, She has caused me too much pain
Don't post in here again.
Can i ask you why? Did offend you?
I can tell by your username you chose alone that you actually progressing will be unlikely. You have 2 post and the likelihood of your activity is questionable. If you really wanted help you would have asked instead of just dropping a random writing built around a style already done.
When has this style been done, if your thinking that i am copying off Eminem, this is my own stuff.
This whole concept of killing a female for being with another dude was off the song Kim done by Eminem...Quote:
Originally Posted by $LIM $H&DY
..the concept itself is played and a typical start with somebody using that name. Perception is everything, it's never what it is but what it looks like.
Oh yeah i havent heard Kim in ages, thanks
No dedication for the weary...
...*shrugs* don't ask
yo if you got any tips for a begginer in mixing, like tricks to approach EQ & Compression n shit then I'd like ya help, all I know right now is EQ & plug ins to help EQ vocals, & that you should always EQ before compression, I know this ain't quite production but if ud be able to help would be apppreciated
or even quick mixing tricks so I can quickly mix my shit for the ABL battles etc etc etc, at this point anything helps
or I could even send u songs & you could tell me what you feel needs to be done for the mix & possibly give directions on what to do
..I'm a active member n serious about help
well you shouldnt always eq before compression, you do what you the mix needs, if after compression you feel it needs eq, you use an eq
you need to experiment and mix using your ears. no one else can tell you any rules, there is none.
there are no "tricks" to compression, you just need to learn about what a compressor is and does and how ot affects the sound. same goes for eq
its ok someone else saying boost around 12k for some air but you might not need air, everyones equipment and needs are personal.
there is no wrong way to mix, if you get the finished sound that you want, then its mixed perfectly.
yo wwas wondering if you could help me ? im trying to write my demo but no point starting till my stuffs good ? should a drop here or what shoudl i do ? peace
If I knew where to start on making beats I would love to but all I know how to do in FL is make a short drum pattern.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...70#post7629970
theres a link to a sick verse i wrote off the top of my head