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muffs wordplay was a little forced.. it just didnt read too smooth. still i like the creativity and it is a tough wordplay to word. arch was very played but i really liked the flip.. and it read well and was worded smoothly. for me wording plays a big part so even tho muff went more creative i just dont think the risk paid off here as it wasnt delivered well enough to beat arches flip. goodluck 2 u both
vote arch
What's with the truck shit? Sheesh golly darn
What's with the generic approaches? Fuck damn shit
Mack your chick & other 'truck' wordplay that barely works together
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'Reduced' Tacoma's with nothing about 'salvaging' trucks & no cooperative setup bar
Mvgt Archetype, I guess, for having less discrepancies
Lol at these truck bars
Archs bar was nice. Smooth read for sure muffs Tacoma play was nice as well, bar was also smooth. But I'm voting for arch's generic swing here. Felt it was a bit harsher and easier read.
V/arch
The Archetype: Ya see.. I've been reading your punches for quite a while now.. And these first two weeks you've been here this season I've felt you lacked creativity.. Especially in this one.. Mack truck.. Like come on my dude that's pretty bland and not very creative in my opinion. To be honest you have a lot more potential.. I liked the wording in this though, good set up.
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MUFF: great and better creativity, wording was Eh but I loved the concept and punch for being real heavy hitting.. The creativity was just a lot more driven in your bar.
Vote: MUFF for being more creative and having a better overall punch.
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V.muff/ nice wordplay and hit hard
The mack truck thing wasn't fresh enough for me, didn't like the label her phrasing. I kinda liked the reduced tacomas, pretty slick
Vote muff
Muff was more creative, even tho his wp doesn't work both ways. Arch had a cool misdirection that hit. I gotta go with Arch because he was simple yet effective while Muff was more creative but iffy at the same time.
v/Arch
Inf - was okay, Nothing amazing but was put together well enough and worked as a solid enough punch.
Muff - wasnt feeling this. was a bit to wordy and indirect. Wanted to like it but just couldn't.
vote inf
10-7 in favor of Muff