lalala... I predict i win... lalala
yep yep, get me in, with an easy swim
lets see if im right
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lalala... I predict i win... lalala
yep yep, get me in, with an easy swim
lets see if im right
P Mortuus vs. Smoka Joka (championship)
Engivale vs. BTK (contenders)
Mariah vs. Cry
B.A. Baracus vs. Bobericc
Uben. Sonned vs. Daz
Ders vs. Syanidal
White Winter vs. Kilaplaya-goodluck
Ruthless vs. Soulstice -?
who is ruthless??
I just want to say one thing.
I am sorry for wasting everyone's time by reading my horrid verse,
and I know it's not up to par as the rest of you, but I'm trying.
Just wanted to get that out of the way.
Why you gotta say shit like that?
Just try and improve...fuck apologizing for anything...
I haven't said I was sorry for losing...ever...
And I've lost plenty.
I've maybe explained a loss...but apologize for it?
Blah.
Head up, man.
Peace
Yea, word. Don't be sorry. Be better, LoL.
Sometimes i'm mean when I do critiques but I always believe its in the best interest of the writer, I've usually made the most progress when people have been hard on me, so, I try to do the same. Just don't bring that ABAB shit in here, lol.
Allright, well thanks for the constructive criticism from all then.
It's very much appreciated.
:)
Yeah Uben, don't get down on yourself man. It's just for fun ultimately - but shit dude, nobody thinks you're terrible, they're looking for ways to help.
Well I guess the main issue is this.
I used to write alot of poetry, which of course is fine.
Decided to branch out into the topical scene, enwhich I'm still transisitioning to not writing a poetic style...
But yeah, I do think this is fun, but I guess at times some criticism descourages me...
It's just how I've been, I take things like writing to heart...Eh...
Fuck what they're saying; You're trash. Kill yourself.
Now see, that's harsh...
:(
But it made me chuckle!
:)
CB, u make me laugh =D
Brand New OM.
I think the flow is way better.
Tell me if it got any better...by leaving some feed...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ds-374315.html
yeah. dont apoligize for losing last week. then you'll owe us an apology next week too. =)