Champion
Barcotic
Challenger
Divine Intervention
Due Sunday by 11:59 (EASTERN)..
Normal FL rules apply.... :alc:
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Champion
Barcotic
Challenger
Divine Intervention
Due Sunday by 11:59 (EASTERN)..
Normal FL rules apply.... :alc:
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Smirnoff
It's funny how you feel that way cuz you're far from the only personQuote:
Originally Posted by Divine
everyone here can relate, so why the fuck are you still posting verses?!
And why did you even accept this? I'll just leave you battered n' bleeding
don't even engage in the battle, your boyfriend can wait til after the beating..
Your parents asked you to join the army but your reaction was sudden insanity
then you went to Baghdad.. but couldn't, cuz having no balls runs in your family..
You should probably just bite dude, cuz everybody knows that your text fails
you're so washed up, you might as well rap about fish bones and dead whales..
This battle's already over and you haven't even posted yet, the 5-0 K.O is near
but after this, you might make a round 2
....decent punches in your whole career..
This kid should be in jail, somewhere we know his verse won't get far
i'd say the gays and dickriders couldn't back his ass...
...But theres always alot of men behind bar's
and it makes me laugh cuz he's rapping all day trying his hardest not to suck
He only quietens when he's having sex... Cuz he don't wanna to wake the bitch up
n' to say that girl in your avvy is posing to please you would be a lie
she's got her little finger in her mouth... becuz she's estimatin your penis size
why not just give up the title, your forced attempts at punchlines make me vomit
we don't wanna see that medal round your neck anyway... Unless your hanging from it
You said it was your birthday last week, gettin drunk n' fucking broads heartily
You may have managed to get drunk with some friends...
... but we know all the fuckin was a one man party
It's funny how you feel that way cuz you're far from the only person
everyone here can relate, so why the fuck are you still posting verses?!
You should probably just bite dude, cuz everybody knows that your text fails
you're so washed up, you might as well rap about fish bones and dead whales
...vs
This kid should be in jail, somewhere we know his verse won't get far
i'd say the gays and dickriders couldn't back his ass...
...But theres always alot of men behind bar's
and it makes me laugh cuz he's rapping all day trying his hardest not to suck
He only quietens when he's having sex... Cuz he don't wanna to wake the bitch up
n' to say that girl in your avvy is posing to please you would be a lie
she's got her little finger in her mouth... becuz she's estimatin your penis size
You said it was your birthday last week, gettin drunk n' fucking broads heartily
You may have managed to get drunk with some friends...
... but we know all the fuckin was a one man party
this was a pretty decent entertaining battle both came str8..bar ya verse was aight u was lest consistant as usual thought and that afeected u in this battle...ya opener was good to me I felt it was a str8 personal that hit hard...divine your defiently elavating ya punches were humorous and creative.....shorten ya bars though your wording is fucking u up I almost voted for bar cuz of that but i be having ling bars myself sometimes overall though u were pretty consistant u had good punches and shit...no hate v/divine keep it up
It's funny how you feel that way cuz you're far from the only person
everyone here can relate, so why the fuck are you still posting verses?!
nah
And why did you even accept this? I'll just leave you battered n' bleeding
don't even engage in the battle, your boyfriend can wait til after the beating..
coo
Your parents asked you to join the army but your reaction was sudden insanity
then you went to Baghdad.. but couldn't, cuz having no balls runs in your family..
ok wp, but didnt like execution
You should probably just bite dude, cuz everybody knows that your text fails
you're so washed up, you might as well rap about fish bones and dead whales..
nah played as fuck
This battle's already over and you haven't even posted yet, the 5-0 K.O is near
but after this, you might make a round 2
....decent punches in your whole career..
cool
vs
This kid should be in jail, somewhere we know his verse won't get far
i'd say the gays and dickriders couldn't back his ass...
...But theres always alot of men behind bar's
ok, but stretched
and it makes me laugh cuz he's rapping all day trying his hardest not to suck
He only quietens when he's having sex... Cuz he don't wanna to wake the bitch up
lol, bad wording tho
n' to say that girl in your avvy is posing to please you would be a lie
she's got her little finger in her mouth... becuz she's estimatin your penis size
cool
why not just give up the title, your forced attempts at punchlines make me vomit
we don't wanna see that medal round your neck anyway... Unless your hanging from it
ok
You said it was your birthday last week, gettin drunk n' fucking broads heartily
You may have managed to get drunk with some friends...
... but we know all the fuckin was a one man party
okish
overall-
wow this match is close as fuck....i mean, ive literally got it with the same amount of good bars, and although a couple of bars lines i was harsher on id still say they were just as good as divines ok bars, this is hard as fuck!
ahhh, ok here we go, bar- i have to say that this verse was one i could tell you thought would be good enough for a weak opponent....which isn't who you faced. you faced someone who's really been improving and looks like he came pretty well in this one in comparison to his past battles. i really think that the 1 bar of barcotics that was bad lost this one for him....i mean it was probably one of the best and closest matches for a while in FL but D.I took this one.
v/ Divine.....BY A CUNT HAIR ROFL
It's funny how you feel that way cuz you're far from the only person
everyone here can relate, so why the fuck are you still posting verses?!
-hm.. Decent..not the best but k
And why did you even accept this? I'll just leave you battered n' bleeding
don't even engage in the battle, your boyfriend can wait til after the beating..
-eh.. not feelin this
Your parents asked you to join the army but your reaction was sudden insanity
then you went to Baghdad.. but couldn't, cuz having no balls runs in your family..
-nice
You should probably just bite dude, cuz everybody knows that your text fails
you're so washed up, you might as well rap about fish bones and dead whales..
-haha.. good.
This battle's already over and you haven't even posted yet, the 5-0 K.O is near
but after this, you might make a round 2
....decent punches in your whole career..
-alright closer :l
Vs DI
This kid should be in jail, somewhere we know his verse won't get far
i'd say the gays and dickriders couldn't back his ass...
...But theres always alot of men behind bar's
-strong opener
and it makes me laugh cuz he's rapping all day trying his hardest not to suck
He only quietens when he's having sex... Cuz he don't wanna to wake the bitch up
-nice
n' to say that girl in your avvy is posing to please you would be a lie
she's got her little finger in her mouth... becuz she's estimatin your penis size
-damn.. Funny shit, nice punch
why not just give up the title, your forced attempts at punchlines make me vomit
we don't wanna see that medal round your neck anyway... Unless your hanging from it
-oK
You said it was your birthday last week, gettin drunk n' fucking broads heartily
You may have managed to get drunk with some friends...
... but we know all the fuckin was a one man party
strong closer
Nice battle you two, good shit.. now, I'm gonna give this to DI, he stayed strong his whole drop, great closer and opener, bar, your best lines came in the last couple bars and I wasn't feelin ya shit, DI, had better flow, punches, and personals so I'm givin my vote to him..
Vote DI
1. Setup well, punch was aight for what it was... It wouldn't have hit hard without the quotes but decent opener.Quote:
Originally Posted by Barcotic
2. Setup could have been better IMO, punch was decent though.
3. Setup well, punches concepts is kind of played but a decent flip here.
4. Setup was meh, Mars said it's played but I honestly haven't seen this... weird cause it's pretty simple. Another decent punch overall.
5. Setup well, I lol'd... nice misdirection, nice closer.
1. Setup well but the concept is played the fuck out, especially as a nameplay on a guy named bar, on a site that had more than one bar (bartender/barcotic). I dunno, maybe if you had came up with a crazy flip but I'm not feeling this punch to be honest.Quote:
Originally Posted by Divine Intervention
2. Setup was bad, punch could have been worded better but I thought it was decent fam.
3. Setup well, the play off the avy was aight, kind of basic but decent.
4. Setup was meh, another played concept... wasn't flipped all that well, I mean it was an okay try but I've seen a couple that were almost identical.
5. Setup well, could have been worded a lot better... It didn't hit all that hard but it was decent for what it was.
Bar, not one of your best verses but you had decent lines all the way through, you were definitely more consistent and your closer was probably my favorite bar of the battle. Divine, I think you had a pretty solid verse for the amount of time you spent writing it. You finally shown what you can you do in a serious battle and I see mad potential. Unfortunately, I gotta give this one to Bar because spitting a nameplay on a guy who's been here for years is basically a no no and punch just came more consistent. Stay up guys.
V/ Barcotic
It's funny how you feel that way cuz you're far from the only person
everyone here can relate, so why the fuck are you still posting verses?!
meh'ish...ok but not really hard hitting, coulda been flipped better of the quotes imo
And why did you even accept this? I'll just leave you battered n' bleeding
don't even engage in the battle, your boyfriend can wait til after the beating..
naa, not feeling it...played concept
Your parents asked you to join the army but your reaction was sudden insanity
then you went to Baghdad.. but couldn't, cuz having no balls runs in your family..
this would've been alot better on Vallus, on DI, not so much...ok though
You should probably just bite dude, cuz everybody knows that your text fails
you're so washed up, you might as well rap about fish bones and dead whales..
oh wow, absolutely not, sir...you know better...
This battle's already over and you haven't even posted yet, the 5-0 K.O is near
but after this, you might make a round 2
....decent punches in your whole career..
lol, best punch of your verse
VS
This kid should be in jail, somewhere we know his verse won't get far
i'd say the gays and dickriders couldn't back his ass...
...But theres always alot of men behind bar's
ok'ish, good nameplay...even tho bar's gonna say it's played...I've seen the concept before but it being nameplay makes it aite...
and it makes me laugh cuz he's rapping all day trying his hardest not to suck
He only quietens when he's having sex... Cuz he don't wanna to wake the bitch up
ok flip on a played concept...decent
n' to say that girl in your avvy is posing to please you would be a lie
she's got her little finger in her mouth... becuz she's estimatin your penis size
lol, nice...
why not just give up the title, your forced attempts at punchlines make me vomit
we don't wanna see that medal round your neck anyway... Unless your hanging from it
lol, decent...played concept but a really good flip...
You said it was your birthday last week, gettin drunk n' fucking broads heartily
You may have managed to get drunk with some friends...
... but we know all the fuckin was a one man party
I think this concept was used on him in the LLL or somewhere, I remember seeing it...but this was a cool bar...
Overall: I think Bar underestimated DI, and dropped a subpar verse (by your standards, don't start bitching at me)...overall I would have to give it to DI, Bar usually comes with sick wordplay but he only had 2 good wordplays in this battle and one of em wasn't that hard hitting and the other was simple...DI came with some good personals and nice punches.
Vote = DI
You should probably just bite dude, cuz everybody knows that your text fails
you're so washed up, you might as well rap about fish bones and dead whales..
v
You said it was your birthday last week, gettin drunk n' fucking broads heartily
You may have managed to get drunk with some friends...
... but we know all the fuckin was a one man party
D.I. came better than expeted but I personally only felt he had one good line in the entire verse. everything else was attempted but poorly executed. Bar also had many attempts...scratch that, i dont think he tried at all in this battle but he flipped a few played lines which ended up having a greater impact
"n' to say that girl in your avvy is posing to please you would be a lie
she's got her little finger in her mouth... becuz she's estimatin your penis size"
^^ that had sooo much potential, D.I. you started off strong in alot of ur punches but they lead to a dead end, ya know?
V/ Bar
It's funny how you feel that way cuz you're far from the only person
everyone here can relate, so why the fuck are you still posting verses?!
eh....ok
And why did you even accept this? I'll just leave you battered n' bleeding
don't even engage in the battle, your boyfriend can wait til after the beating..
Hell naw!
Your parents asked you to join the army but your reaction was sudden insanity
then you went to Baghdad.. but couldn't, cuz having no balls runs in your family..
wrong person...lol...good line for Val
You should probably just bite dude, cuz everybody knows that your text fails
you're so washed up, you might as well rap about fish bones and dead whales..
oh wow, absolutely not, sir...you know better...
This battle's already over and you haven't even posted yet, the 5-0 K.O is near
but after this, you might make a round 2
....decent punches in your whole career..
LOL
VS
This kid should be in jail, somewhere we know his verse won't get far
i'd say the gays and dickriders couldn't back his ass...
...But theres always alot of men behind bar's
meh...ok
and it makes me laugh cuz he's rapping all day trying his hardest not to suck
He only quietens when he's having sex... Cuz he don't wanna to wake the bitch up
played but flipped
n' to say that girl in your avvy is posing to please you would be a lie
she's got her little finger in her mouth... becuz she's estimatin your penis size
LOL!!!
why not just give up the title, your forced attempts at punchlines make me vomit
we don't wanna see that medal round your neck anyway... Unless your hanging from it
lol, decent...played concept but a really good flip...
You said it was your birthday last week, gettin drunk n' fucking broads heartily
You may have managed to get drunk with some friends...
... but we know all the fuckin was a one man party
Lol.....its aiight
I can say congratz on DI he pulled a good victory in this battle...Bar aint no easy opponent....Bar you just had to many played concepts..n ya punches were JUST ok!
v/DI
Rofl @ this battle.. this honestly just proves how whack Front Lines is..
I'm winning in LLL's champ match, but I just lost to Divine in FRONT LINES?? lmao.. ya'll need to elevate for real.. and if I EVER battle here again, there won't be any dudes voting with records like "2-8" or "0-10".. and I REALLY regret saying that his crew members could vote..
Good job Divine, you had a couple decent lines.. but you clearly didn't win this.. if I posted this in LLL, you wouldn't get a single vote.. so good job, but not really.. this shit pisses me off....