Originally Posted by -=|TumTum|=-
Stopped Time
It is an undescribable pain from the inside to the out
when what u do to everyone is with questionable doubtnow please try and define the line between good and evil
^^^Dope opener, i liked them 1st two lines-good 1
cuz in a sense i swayed on the thiness of bein decietfull
quite sometime ago my wife passed and i lost my mind
decided to try & reverse time in order of fasion undesigned
thought by reversing time i would be able to stop her death
but the process...stopped...and it was an enevitable step
^^^Got some nice rhymes homs, vocab is ok to.
looked around to see everyone frozen in unoderly fashion
stuned and dazed and this is when the world came crashin
I walked and walked as everone stood still, not a 1 twitchin
rushed home wishin, but found my wife frozen in the kitchen
"HONEY!, HONEY!" is what i screamed as i lunged out for her
looking deep into her eyes to see nothing but a dazed blurr
shaking her, and still not a stir, and that is when I broke down
fell on the ground cryin at her feet, but she didnt hear a sound
wiped tears from my eyes, in surprise, i gave 1 final kiss in shame
went back..emptynes?,a whisper "TumTum".."Who said my name?"
Sequal????.......Mayyyyyybe
dont close this im gettin my 2 links now