~Wizdumb~ ..

yo

I take aim thru scripture.. paintin sinister pictures in one's mind
Sun blind, blistering shine.. rhyme mixture designed
My light fixtures a moon's crecsent..studyin truth's lessons
till i die, and rise to the true essence
Purified by pain, I revised my gains, staked my claims
But was never forced to sign my name
We're all one and the same race... far as minds can tell
All flesh bear the same taste.. to the fires of Hell
Vicious inflictions.. religious victems of tabernackles
Since Adam's apple.. we've all been stricken to shackles
With evil spirits to grapple.. livin thru battles
Evadin' the snake pit... caged in the slave ship
Abolish makeshift knowledge of fake wit
Layin dormant like a cancerous mass
Until the day it rise like Lazerous past
Why pray to God? He'll never answer us back
Till Holy rapture attacks.. then maybe after the blast
The answers lay wit the bodies.. trapped in ash

sic shit man, bravo.........
good rhyme scheme, tight flow.
i like the piece because it has a historical/ biblical resonance which i feel reflects the natural battle of Yin and Yang, Hard and Soft, ect. well done.

thx for the comments man... always appreciated

anyone else?

it was real good i was feelin the flow (it was eazy to read)
overall i sat 8/10 good job homie

read my shit and tell what you think itz called What Now (feedBack PLEASE)

thx bro.. i peeped your shit and it was tight fo sho... peace