Pandora's Box Anthem Part 2!!!

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The PB Anthem Part 2

Camrok: (Verse 1)

Pandoras Box, PB, Part Two, can you hear this
Fahreinheit, hot mic, that's right you can hear fizz
This shits, off the top, quick hits, we have wits bliss
Switch-twist this style.. Anthem Two, dope we don' miss this

Our members will beat you, black and blue, leave you low
U wanna no-show, throw the match, cuz u already know
The outcome is basic, but we do what we do, yea complex
We flex the best, pens strength compress, what- who's next
Bitch, you rest, can't go toe-to-toe, can't make extra innings
If the end lines' nine, PB shines best bet wages on winnings
We got poets, heroic in quest, text never miss a syllable
Topical defines optical, perfection in imagery, audio killable
Shit, can you miss? We flow, make sounds whoa in constant
Box blockage, no waterfall sweeps you, yo who wants it...


Se7en: (Verse 2)

Were dope, not a joke, think so we'll remove your spleen.
We spit like our fire's lit, to split across your computer screen.
Pandora's Box was recruited by satan himself, to help.
Create a blazing flame, that was needed to create fire in hell.
Fell off the hook-up forum, only to rise in our crew forum.
Dope is juss good, our worst crew members are the new norm.
New born, but not newb, or new, we juss love our crew.
From old to the new, we throw punches no one's ever threw.
Original, subliminal lines, pack wit our original rhymes.
Make us muder MCs, like we all have a rap criminal minds.
My intro, the message I send though is locked in this verse.
Come on our worst day and you'll still end up nailed in a herse.


Escar: (Verse 3)

We'll gladly merk your crew, then leave ur squad in our cage
Take souls away for no reason, like God fell in a rage
We weren't trained to do it, it's in our blood to clap foes 'n' fight
Look up the "Courage of Legends", it leads to Pandora's Might
You come up with oblivion, and we teach the fundamentals
Bow down, coz God gave all of u lives & sent us to end them
Erase you off the surface, like we got embodied as floods
Merk, 'till all the battle forums are filled with dead bodies & blood
We perplex enemies... And like see-saws, you sink & we rise
Our might's destructive, have ur PC blown in the blink of an eye
You sit & watch as your throne gets thrown... We come to conquer
We drain your blood as you lay helpless, coz we son from hunger
Who can step up and fight us? It's true, we're the best indeed
We've accomplished the impossible, served ur death, now Rest In Peace


Tactixx: (Verse 4)

Intoducing the crew, Lyrically gifted and most often elite
Poetical flows and topicals, plus in text we can't be beat
Brought up on different streets, but on this site we united
Watch our grips tighten on RB, we have our targets sighted
Eat your crew?..We'd be delighted.........
........................Just pick who you wanna fight with..


We got an Ace up our sleeves, In frontlines he's leading the team
Or we can throw Streetz on a beat and let him blow off some steam
Shawty turn poems to dreams while Escar's rhymes leave you amazed
And Were gonna have Daedal's record framed one of these days
beat you in so many ways,ask Aines, Or wait I'll do you one better
Battlin us is bad luck............Like throwin away a chain letter


Sidious: (Verse 5)

Battling us is Asinine, cuz I mastered rhymes in the fastest time-
Im the top of the food chain-high, wont die or let any-otha bastard climb-
Im with pandoras Box, a horror box.. psychotics with a plathora of glocks-
Sid can knock and pop..till ya body drops and your spirits aurua stops-
My flows on top, bet Vets get showed a-lot, on what they should do not-
Fuck who you got cuz im back to kill, back too ill you fakes try to rap n' thrill
I'm aiming for you cats and rats until- you get knocked like jack and jill
You lackin skill think you ill? - you must be on crack and pills-
My soldiers stackin' bills, kickin back relaxed and chilled'-
And1, and Aces team'd with Aines and Tactics
Handgun's, cases beam pain to faggots-
I'm still the same son, Sid the kid $best with digits$-
Test my team ya rest with stitches, you bitches burn like witches-
Sid return ridged with no limits-
And i'm over and out from the U.S.S. NIMITZ!!


nard: (Verse 6)

Kid we’ll snap ye arm off an put ye own fist thru ye chest
You need to think of me at your birthday and wish for the best
Kus we will come through you know this way is proper
How I leave victims in my lines like a fuckin lazy doctor
The kid’ll fright, don’t make me have to get called to fight
Kus you weak ass crews will receive more hits than porno sites
We will rip off ye flesh, an day time T.V will censor ye face
Pandora have you kissin the pavement like the pope enterin states
Get ye defence to embrace, Nard known to sink ye game
I’ll Pop ye brain a footstep behind you and let you think again!!!!!!


Stuff'd Aminol: (Verse 7)

The world around lost hope when pandora's box opened
typing on ivory, sacred keys unlocked omens
pond geckos died instantly in the croc's oceans
speakin' ill in the visual, our descents, glaucomen
in walked parties of trojans, cold hearts and chests raving
punches hit the right angles, positions set scalene
ancient mountains choked magma, with warm breaths flaming
down went chin up gym floors as each bar left you hanging
lead of a pencil staining the scrolls with expert aiming
rhymes devouring mics, the foamy flesh obtaining
demoned swarms knocked on doors but the answer was lost
the brainless never paid fully when thought was the cost

Links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...56#post1622656
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66#post1622666

Pz

Blah - Camrok's part sucked so much I just skipped to Tactixx's which was at least written well even if it was full of lies...

Bottom line: For a crew so easily whorable the "we can't be beat" theme doesn't work too well...

Blah, you obviously don't know shit about our crew.

Oh and, yeah, this one sucked, no one really tried so blah.

this was an okay callab but if it was going to be a whole crew why not try your hardest just saying had a good flow some people i think fell of a bit but it worked as a crew callab you guys keep doing ya thing


be kind peep mine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141873

dis was an ok colab but i kno da crew and i kno fo a fact yall can do betta denn dis. but u need to take dis shyt back to da drawin board and drop it again..........but all togetha it was an alright drop

Uppin' like there is no tomorrow...

camrok: Dopeness in first four lines dawg
felt like in certain points it was falling off, and the pauses was okay, but i think you went alittle overboard with'em

"Our members will beat you, black and blue, leave you low"
comma between you and black was not needed it sorta held ya verse back

Seven: Decent opening, but the creating a fire in hell line didn't make sense to me, prolly cuz you use a period at the end of every line which grammatical wrong, since you haven't stopped ya idea, so get rid of those. you also change tones in ya verse, it's good to keep a constant tone(tone means a state of mind) you went from i love my crew to my crew kills all over crews, didn't like that overall decent tho

Escar: dope shit i can't really say nuttin bad except for the ending peace and indeed, hard shit to make rhyme you would really have to sound that shit out

Tactixx: Dope shit as well even tho the tone changes it makes a smooth transition to the new tone pretty nicely lol have daedal record framed lmao, dope

Sid:Internally in thisom you were the best, i like how everything is worded nicely, but hook it up with sum commas and shit or people will read ya work anyway they want 2, and it won't sound right to them

Nard:I wasn't 2 Impressed man, you weren't on par with every1 else, i don't think you put much thought in this

Stuff'd: Dope i'd have to say you get the overall best verse, cuz you approached the shit more original than anybody, y'all call yasleves Pandora's Box, but no one tried to incorprate the actually story of it into they verse, i feel stuff'd did cuz when the box was opened first thing to pop in pandora's mind was i destroyed the world, and stuff'd gave that type of feel to his verse

well after this long ass explanation of this drop you guys should be pride cuz if i took the time to write all this, it means i liked it, so make sure you hit the peice up in my sig, and thankz for a great drop

Thx, thx alot for the feedback.

Although, word, we didn't try in this one.

Part 3 will be the dopest one ever though, I promise you :thumbup:.

this was an ok verse some parts were real work but were levelled out by other persons pieces.. overall i would give this. 6-10..
pz.

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Originally Posted by UrbanReelist

Stuff'd: Dope i'd have to say you get the overall best verse, cuz you approached the shit more original than anybody, y'all call yasleves Pandora's Box, but no one tried to incorprate the actually story of it into they verse, i feel stuff'd did cuz when the box was opened first thing to pop in pandora's mind was i destroyed the world, and stuff'd gave that type of feel to his verse

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that was the exact theme and originality i was tryna get across, mission accomplished, yay

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Originally Posted by Nephil

Blah - Camrok's part sucked so much I just skipped to Tactixx's which was at least written well even if it was full of lies...

Bottom line: For a crew so easily whorable the "we can't be beat" theme doesn't work too well...

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lol.. maybe he's upset about something. Maybe cause Hence Forward is going down the shit hole.. No offense taken, I'm sure u know how I can write. SMZ... yea.

Thanks for the feedback to everyone else.. I'll try and peep some stuff at a later time. Nice collab fellas.

I don't know who he is, or actually, it doesn't look like I give a shit.

SMZ, blow me bitch :thumbup:.

This sucked? Maybe, but I'll prove you wrong in part 3 :D. And don't judge shit when you ain't even read the rest of the verses, such as Stuff'd Aminol's and Sidious'.

'Chea...

I think HF whored your crew once...

but it's nice you guys can come back with such...enthusiasm.

j/p, nah, this was...i don't know, i'm not much into these *introduction of crew* things. Especially when you all boast of text battling skills and only a few of you are LLL Jr. level. But hey.

No, it was...a good read.

Hit up my other Open Mic!!! "The Writer's Mind".

:D

'Chea, and most of them are above L.L.L. Jr. level, well yeah...

not quite Whored..

But hey, I understand. HF needs to criticize so much other shit, to boost their own self-confidence... always been that way. It's cool.. and I was drunk on my last post. I really don't care what SMZ says either.