Late Night Freestyle Feedback Anybody Would Be Appreciated
got a warning as his avatar...letting you know not to read...
you always follow in my foot steps...so ive got to lead...
you should not impede...the path that im taking...
maybe you should use that map that you making...this cat is faking...
WARNING...thats the only dangerous word you ever use...
all you hear is hissing and dissing...when i hop on stage the crowd never boos...
you keep on missing the kissing...probably cuz you a redneck wearing leather shoes...
calling people newbies...when its you who's the rook...
just cuz you didnt get caught biting rhymes...doesnt mean you not a crook...
you shoulda got a book...so you could come up wit a decent line...
you only needed one...only reason i keep on going on is cuz of this weed n rum...
you need to run...feed my gun...a steady stream of lead...
after its done eating it burps...and look ya team is dead...paint the town a cream red...
thats the blood mixed wit brains...the meds fix the pain...im so DyMoNiK...
after i cut ya...ill lick ya veins...stick ya name...
in my pile of mc's witout hope...i asked for a dope line...
and this kid sticks out coke...
oh jeez us...he didnt just say that...thats pay back...for way back...
when you tried to spray gats...at my may bach...you didnt buy that...
i paid wit money i made...when i layed tracks...
on my first cd...your hearse see me...drivers shook...
like he got a worse vd...than crabs or syphilis...
rap bout spittin this...grab a sippin glass...fill it up wit hennessy...
visualize a memory...about what you were sending me...
in elementary...got time to think...cuz im in the penetentiary...
didnt wanna bring that up...listen to me sing that cut...
the chorus...bout my timbs...aka a forest...dont bore us...
cuz all your bodys pourus...ill have your veins dripping...
look at this lame sipping...on a bitch drink...
switch drinks...so i can pitch winks...at your girl from across the party...
to be as crunked as me...it costs bacardi...along wit some of that sticky doja...
quickly soldier...get that chip off ya shoulder...
cuz otherwise ill shoot it off...
you might wanna put some VIAGRA in ya dude...
becuz you is soft....
