Originally Posted by
ThaKING.
this was a song i was gonna try...idk i got uninspired...let me know if its good or not...btw ill def be in here ALOT so feel free to drop ur shit as well for FEEDBACK!
OFF TRACK (ST by beats planet) (bad?)
(premaid hook)
im feelin off track, chillin at tha trap
dealin out tha crack, pillin on a stack
realest on tha rap, so they give love back
lying over beats? im not one who does that
sharp as a thumb tac, but i cant focus
not when tha worst are tha ones gettin promoted
its just how i wrote it, i keep my mind open
but these rappers are lame, how did they get voted?
mayb with all tha lines they quoted, n all tha dick they throated
its no wonder that they floated, to tha top, on some hoe shit
but hey, "hes tha dopest!", ok dully noted
wait that cant be right, oh its connoted
no i was jokin, i control em, like a remote
write lines fast like my mind, was a speed boat
hit hard like a keynote, off track but i de-vote
all my time to perfectin my art, til im the-GOAT
(hook)
im off track, now its like im lost
gettin rich is expensive, n i didnt know tha cost
my mind is in a fog, i cant see clearly
rap is gettin worse, n i see this yearly
watch em dance, n do their lil gay thing
that tha other retards just love imiating
im just sayin, yo dude where is ya skill at?
did u leave it back at ya boyfriends house where u chill at?
dude bring tha real back, n write some real lines
i hang with real cats, cuz my hood really feels mine
n i fill minds, with metaphors n dope vocab
all u do write a hook, that we laugh at
ur muziks better off in a trash bag, n i mean that
talkin bout weed n cash, but u cant show me where tha green at?
they say im dope n crazy, or somwhere inbewteen that
but im off, like a broken scale, but i cant balance me back
(hook)
yeah DOPE or NOPE? let me know...